graduate portfolio crit
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- Fanco
I'm throwing myself to the wolves of the PVN.
I've just graduated from university and i've updated my portfolio. I'm looking for some crit please.
(and yes everything is in french)
thanks
- Fanco0
haha. woops
- Jaline0
This? http://www.frerejacques.ca/
nice to see you, by the way :)
- Drno0
apparemment tu viens de montreal
moi je séparerais les 2 sections dans des pages diverses
graphics & photosle travail est bon
- sikma0
nice stuff. it would be worth your time to put some english in there.
- MSTRPLN0
tough balance between the photos and the graphic design work.
- neue75_bold0
I might ask you in for an interview, but I don't think you'd get the position. But I would be keen to see how your work continues to progress as you get older...
I might do this from outside your bedroom window...
- hahahadskz
- lolJaline
- which position do you have that i have no chance with?Fanco
- oh and feel free to watch me. I'm moving to a new place soon. i might need the companyFanco
- where are you moving to?Jaline
- still in montreal. just a new (kick ass) apartment.Fanco
- I'm hiring a junior designer in Amsterdam at the moment, not really your thing though, corporate crap...neue75_bold
- i work for a TV station doing print!.. not the most creative but a stepping stone for a better career.Fanco
- good luck to you mon ami!neue75_bold
- that doesn't sound horribleJaline
- dskz0
- agreed, possibly the best thing in your folio...neue75_bold
- thanks!
some appear to agree. it got me a couple of prizesFanco - http://farm2.static.…Dr_Rand
- rip!neue75_bold
- that's no rip!ukit
- ...but I want that shirt. Where can I get it?ukit
- I like it too, but what it is it? What is the meaning behind it?2cents
- skt0
can't see half of it on my laptop.
oh well.
- dskz0
- organic_grid0
Looks like a college student portfolio, nice job.
- ian0
Hi wolf bait, nice to meet you.
First impressions are nice work, but site a little ramshackle. The first project looks a little out of place with the cut out books floating in space, especially compared with the rather more structure pictures further into the site. It could do with more definitive some kind of divide between the projects (even if its just a little more space) and then if you're looking for a job in an english speaking country, put some text in english. if not, don't.Nice work btw.
- NewElpaso0
i cant read the caption rollovers.. could youmake them any colour BUT white?
work is nice though :)
- NewElpaso0
actually the gray boxes hadnt loaded..
all is good! :)
- Seanbot0
I really like your work, but I'm kind of unsure about the photography. It seems inbalanced in a way; though, that's only a matter of opinion.
You will do great things!
- oozie0
refine the photography selection to a few of the best ones
- horton0
or stagger the photos in the same way you have the design work.. or vice versa (linear display of design work).
right now it seems like such short presentation of design, and then a looooong scroll through photos.
- horton0
really fresh work though.. i like the photos very much.
- Fanco0
cool. thanks guys!
I'll split the site into two section or reduce a bit the photography section. and then obviously work on an english version since I'm open to work anywhere internationally.
again. many thanks!