Logo Crit
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- skt0
- akrokdesign0
that green is pretty teal. are you sure the client will like that?
- doesnotexist0
your boxes need work.
- brandelec0
!yes supposed to be a B
thanks qbn for the help, i will make the adjustments and send her off
- Bypasser0
Nice, I like it.
But I think the space between Self and Storage could be a bit smaller.- I agree, I'd like to see the space tightened up a bit.Complexfruit
- WeLoveNoise0
for once on QBN i'm gona say i like it ............ dont change it cos i think youve done a good job and i like the black box in the back.
works really well - good shit dude
- chossy0
I like the first logo which you started the thread with, I like the boxes and the bounding box, the type is fine but I am a real sucker for a tricksy little thing done with type. As it stands (the first one) I like it well done :)
- brandelec0
see i wanted to go with some flaps but then was told they're going beyond just storage units and offering larger yards for boats etc.
hmm, im gonna try to play with that anyways
- 7point340
i prefer the 1st of the 3 you just posted
- anxiousarms0
maybe a bit of a shadow coming off the boxes for a little more depth?
- anxiousarms0
that's a real nice green/blue. what if you made the BELMAR a little bigger and made SELF STORAGE a little smaller and thinner? it's awesome now, just a suggestion.
i like the green one best tho. and the rectangle on top rather than the square.
- horton0
... already shaping-up to be design thread of the day.
- horton0
re. the yellows...
if your concerned about printing and limiting spot colors i'd suggest using 1 rich yellow ink, and tint it to 50% for your 2nd color... black and yellow don't mix nice. the tinted 50% yellow will look bright and pop.
i'd also suggest you move the lighter yellow color to the top sides of cubes, otherwise it looks like your logo has lighting from below which is not natural.
- Nairn0
I echo neue's comments generally, d_rek's detail in that it needs a little more contrast internally and gramme's thought-provoking analysis of the relationship, or lack thereof, between form and type.
Additionally, I add my own positive sentiment in the form of "Good job".
- gramme0
skt's on the Straight & Narrow. What he said.
Also, right now your logotype doesn't have a strong spatial relationship to the mark. I'd baseline-up that right corner with "Self".