Logo Crit
Logo Crit
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- 23kon0
No.5 is the most interesting out of the revisions in terms of the insignia you've created.
Does the girl have a "style" of interior design that she's known for?
Might be worth taking an element of some kind of floral pattern (if thats the kind of shiz she does) and tweaking that to suit.
1b looks like Dolby or something
- i_monk0
5 (based on old 4) just looks vertically squished, and now masculine.
- pinkfloyd0
- letter spacing inconsistencies and letter weight inconsistencies is distracting.MHDC
- yeah, I need to clean it up, more looking to get feedback on the bones of the logopinkfloyd
- J?freedom
- I think the style is cool, but the letters need to have a better "flow", they seem disjointed right now but a few tweaks and you'll have a solid logo.MHDC
- ^good advicepinkfloyd
- Is the "J" hard to read?pinkfloyd
- for starters the majority of angles are at 45 degrees... but then it deviates from that. The w, the two legs in the r are differentMHDC
- maybe the nihongo could be: 作成して破壊するshapesalad
- ^not sure what that meanspinkfloyd
- Looks a little early 2000's if that's the look you're going for.dbloc
- Sleep on it.
Then perhaps sleep on it again.detritus - Spacing's all over the place, disjointed, internally-inconsist... no flow as already said - the J is particularly egregious.
Is this based on a grid?detritus - is it KickinsWorld? The J looks like a foot. : )dbloc
- 90's thread?oey
- yeah, I was inspired by the early 2000's threadpinkfloyd
- lol @ -1pinkfloyd
- in that case it's definitely on point. I'd work on the J and clean it up a bit as far as thickness and spacing.dbloc
- I meant clean it up overall as far as thickness and spacing and then consider reworking the J to make it more legible.dbloc
- Did you start on [gridded] paper, pinkle?detritus
- just two lines, but the rest was freeballingpinkfloyd
- it's quite well executed but just such a dated style now, I would go for something less stylised for a site containing your work, let the work speak for itself.fadein11
- Simple, classic, minimal which won't overpower the illustration work on the site perhaps?fadein11
- for some reason I read it as jizz world as well, but that's prob just me.fadein11
- yeah, I was concerned it didn't match my workpinkfloyd
- stop looking at japanese pornpinkfloyd
- :) share your site once up pleasefadein11
- Unless you're focusing on that anime style thing you posted recently, I'd re-consider this route - i don't see what it adds, all i can see is how it'd detractdetritus
- anime isn't my focus, so I guess I need a different logopinkfloyd
- let your work speak for itself, an elaborate logo will look like an excuse for the stuff you are showing if not careful imhofadein11
- I would never dv a work share by the way, find that a bit rude/odd.fadein11
- https://tokyofox.fil…set
- I only recently learnt that SuperDry is a British company and fuck all to do with Japan.detritus
- Jizz world though, great name.
Can't knock that.set - I like how you guys can't read the J, but jizzworld pops out you cuntspinkfloyd
- ya... none of my Japanese tourist friends knows the brand SuperDry.pango
- pinkfloyd6
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- likeGuyFawkes
- Also, jizzworld is takenpinkfloyd
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- I like that. Don't like the googly eyes but otherwise think it could be really nice with some developmentset
- wot set sedMrT
- A much better direction - can't wait to see how it turns out!detritus
- pinkfloyd4
- I think this is much more appropriate.monospaced
- NICE I LIKE THE OROBUS DOUBLING AS A SWAN, I WOULD PROBABLY BEEF UP AND ANGLE UP THE WINGS A BIT. COOL!nudes
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thing is a little clumsy and odd.
Design is cool though! MUCH better than that other thing.detritus - When you do decide on a font, please fritz with it a little after it's set — give it a hint of the texture in your drawing.
xdetritus - With your illustration skillz, you should really do the type by hand if you can. Find a type you like, and do it!jaylarson
- The orobus represents the cycle of create and destroy. The pose is playing off use your illusions, art hype, and greek philosophy along with the renaissance.pinkfloyd
- The pungi represents charming the snake of creation. I put a lot of thought into. Thanks guys!pinkfloyd
- A hand drawn font might work better, good ideapinkfloyd
- yeah... roughen the type a little... doesn't have to be hand drawn (go w/a font)... maybe a serif tho (same thickness as you're showing here)PonyBoy
- great illo. Not sure the type need to be curved - at least not that much.Fax_Benson
- on a side note, that illustration would make for a killer tattoomonospaced
- thanks mono, i was actually inspired by tattoos, great eye!pinkfloyd
- illustration is great man. I think a more free form font or hand drawn would work best since there really are no sharp edges in the illustration.dbloc
- I saw a swan at first, but now I see it's an angel in front of a snake eating itself.dbloc
- thanks, yep it's an angel.pinkfloyd
- pinkfloyd0
- It looks familiar.i_monk
- Ah, reminds me of Brak from Space Ghost.i_monk
- I kinda like this. That shading on the front makes it look a bit like a cake. Maybe a bit more attitude?MrT
- Cake? lol ok i'm never posting here againpinkfloyd
- Remind me of MF DoomIanbolton
- space ghost ftwGnash
- neat! i agree w mrt - the shading is distracting. i like how the sketch emphasizes cat features whereas the render feels a bit stiff.bezoar
- I agree as well, mr t likes cakepinkfloyd
- Yes, with a nice cup of tea. #signs I'm getting old.MrT