Logo crit
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- j1983m0
what's the background? ... what's the logo for?
without knowing anything about the project my preference is the 3rd but i think it could be crafted a but more and work with the type to have this really beautiful mark.
the type in the 1st and 2nd option isn't working for me, it looks too forced and in turn makes it look kind of messy...
- imadesigner0
First one, but make him smaller ish.
- OhYeah0
Yeah not sure what it's for, but number 3.
- kojikabuto0
I like the 1st option, I would try to make the S a little more legible though, and what is that font you're using in the 3rd option? I like it.
- alicetheblue0
First or Last (with some finessing;)
-as said - depends on project-
- wckd0
Yeah, hasty me.. it's for a small, starting creative studio.. And indeed, they're all just in the first phase - just trying to figure out which way to go forward..
- dyspl0
1st one, but with an other font IMO
- alicetheblue0
then I'd go with the First - as it has a personality
also I agree :
make s legible
elephant smaller- what about elephant balancing on the "i" - just a thoughtalicetheblue
- I like the first as well. is there any way to get the S to mimic the trunk of the elephant? maybe it's a bad idea thoughtheredmasque
- kojikabuto0
you know what... I yake back the S thing, it works :) the Paquiderm should be a tad smaller though, you know what's a cool detail? How the lines from the S and the trunk are really similar but flipped .
- alicetheblue0
the wierd "S" and the elephant fight for attention
IMO
- j1983m0
if it is the 1st one u work with i think u need a different type treatment. it works well with the corbis mark because thats it, yours has the type treatment and the elephant which doesn't allow you to focus on either the word or the icon.
- wckd0
Thank you all for the feedback, I'll see what I can do with that s + size of the elephant.. Just a thought here - on some odd occasions the type might have to be presented without the elephant (can't really think of when specifically) and that's when I wouldn't mind the s fighting for attention..
- ....on odd occasions???
alicetheblue - replace the S with the elephant face!!!! hahaha that would be awesome if you did that, well maybe not, decapitating cute animals is not coolkojikabuto
- animals is not coolkojikabuto
- ....on odd occasions???
- plash0
i like the elephant one. its cute and made me smile.
- d_rek0
i like the playfulness of 1+2 but the type is not working for me... the way the bowls of the c's connect to the next letter looks odd and that S is just god-awful.
There is a nice elegance happening with #3, with no knowledge or background I am immediately drawn to that one.
- dMullins0
I'm personally liking #2, without knowing anything about the company. I think if #2 was chosen, that you could benefit from working on the icon more––those closure lips on the balloon look really large.
- kojikabuto0
make sure to post the changes, I would love to see where this logo goes...
- epikore0
these are very nice
- zenmasterfoo0
I dig the elephant. I agree, make him a bit smaller, but I like where this is going.